The Blood Stained Dress |
| By Cyonide |
2009-12-25 16:19:19 |
I Woote this while in School for homework it was a creative writing class
The Blood Stained Dress
Bride Lin Rong wed in August in China’s Eastern Jilin Province, walking down the aisle in a dress that was more than 7,000 feet ( 1.3 miles ) long (rolled up in a wagon behind her).
Lin Rong always wanted a wedding, but not one like this. Everything was so out of place. The cake was melting, the flowers were wilting, and only half of the people came that were a on the guest list. Let me start from the begin. She met Mr. Right in her family’s restaurant.
Mr. Right (Mr. Right was head of a million dollar jade industry.) would go their every day at 11:45am, he was a regular there. The owners daughter Lin Rong, had an eye for him. So one evening she nervously approached the 23 year old and unwrapped the sheet and gave him a present. Mr. Right is shocked at the gift and asks “What is this thing?” He said surprisingly. “ Oh dat, dat is a snake eyeball, it is believed to bring good luck?” She said as confidently as she could.
Now, when women give you gifts, it usually means the either want something form you, or they are just trying to be nice. However in this case Lin wanted Mr. Right to marry her. It so turns out that Mr. Right liked Ling too. So they arranged a private wedding.
She had 2 months and a week to plan her wedding. She was so flabbergasted about all of the wedding dresses she saw in the catalog that she just bought them all. Shortly after she pondered to herself “Now what am I going to do with all of these dresses?” She wasn’t thinking very clearly and decided to sew all the “Pretty” dresses together.
She arranged to have flowers and a ice-cream cake, and she hoped that all her guests would be there. As two months went by, there was not a day she didn’t think about the wedding . Finally Ling’s big day, her wedding. She was so excited, her husband however had mutual feelings towards her. Before the wedding proceeds, she fits into her technic colored dress, the husband wore a traditional tuxedo.
The final words of the priest were “If these two would not be wed in holy matrimony, speak now or forever hold your peace.” Mr. Right was going to say something, but could not, for the fear of what this crazy lady would do if he said no.
After the wedding she was as happy as she could be, him however, it felt like this was old to him. In the middle of the night he left the house and met with another girl. Mr. Right was having an affair with her.
Wong (Mr. Right) comes back home in the morning, and Ling was awake, Yawns “ uhm, so where were you last night?” She asks in a scraggily voice. “What, what women, I have no idea what you are talking about” he replied nervously while he is sweating like crazy. “Are you having an affair with me?” Lin asks as she is about to cry. Wong has no answer.
”That’s it isn’t it, your cheating on me, aren’t you? People who make me upset or mad have a tendency to disappear.” She says in an almost like Mafia tone of voice. Wong passes out from the shear intimidation she is throwing out, and collapses.
She takes Wong and takes him to their room. Wong awoke in his room several hours later bound and gagged. “ I told you never to get me upset or angry, or bad things would happen to you, and what do you do huh, you blew your chance. Goodbye forever Wong Right!” She said in a scary tone of voice.
She drags Wong to a butcher shop outside of town, and drags him into the slaughtering room where all of the sharp objects were. She chooses the weapon slowly to build up anticipation, and chooses the filet knife to slice off those little fingers of his.
Lin bends down and picks up the bone saw and sawed off Wong’s legs. Wong’s scream of help and pain are muffled from the burlap knot that was in his mouth, all he could do was wait and die a horrible death.
After Lin was done sawing off his legs, she slowly worked her way up the torso and cut off his, . . . well I don’t have to tell you what she cut off next.
After enduring such pain Wong is surprisingly still alive, she finishes the job with the machete, while surprisingly still wearing her wedding dress, she lopped off Wong’s head. After the horrid murder was committed she cut off a length of her dress and wrapped his body in the dress, and went down to the river to “Feed the fishes” if you catch my drift.
That morning after the murder, she was in charge of his million dollar company. No one really knows what happened to Wong that night, perhaps he ran off in the middle of the night, or broke up with Lin Wong, who’s to say, only Lin herself knows what happened. ( It ends with a close up of Lin’s face normal, then with her eyes slowly turning red, and then the screen fades to black.) |
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